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托福写作范文:Parents are the best teachers

美国留学云-托福写作-2012年06月26日 18:19

  托福写作是中国考生的其中一个大弱项,其中语法、用词以及逻辑思维是写作的问题所在,只有在日常生活中多读些范文,了解托福写作中满分作文的逻辑思维,从哪方面考虑问题,句型难度,才可更好的进行锻炼。下

  托福写作是中国考生的其中一个大弱项,其中语法、用词以及逻辑思维是写作的问题所在,只有在日常生活中多读些范文,了解托福写作中满分作文的逻辑思维,从哪方面考虑问题,句型难度,才可更好的进行锻炼。下面我们一起来欣赏这篇满分作文吧!

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  范文

  Throughout my life, I have been lucky enough to have a very good relationship with my parents. They have supported me, given me necessary criticism, and taught me a great deal about how to live my life. Parents can be very important teachers in our lives; however, they are not always the best teachers.

  Parents may be too close to their children emotionally. Sometimes they can only see their children though the eyes of a protector. For example, they may limit a child's freedom in the name of safety. A teacher might see a trip to a big city as a valuable new experience. However, it might seem too dangerous to a parent.

  Another problem is that parents may expect their hildren's interests to be similar to their own. They can't seem to separate from their children in their mind. If they love science, they may try to force their child to love science too. But what if their child's true love is art, or writing , or car repair?

  Parents are usually eager to pass on their value to their children. But should children always believe what their parents do? Maybe different generations need different ways of thinking. When children are young, they believe that their parents are always rights. But when they get older, they realize there are other views. Sometimes parents, especially older ones, can't keep up with rapid social or technology changes. A student who has friends of all different races and backgrounds at school may find that her parents don't really understand or value the digital revolution. Sometimes kids have to find their own ways to what they believe in.

  The most important thing to realize is that we all have many teachers in our lives. Our parents teach us, our teachers teach us, and our peers teach us. Books and newspapers and television also teach us. All of them are valuable.

  以上就是托福写作欣赏的文章,给大家参考下,写作除了语句之外更不能忽略的就是词汇量,大家可千万不要忘了这个重中之重,业余时间要多看看词汇书籍,多写几篇作文修改,坚持下去便可在日后发现自己写作水平的飞跃。

 
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